Full as the Forest
Veins
curve opaquely
raindrops fall
fall down
down
tiptoeing brokenly
upon carved dark passageways.
My heart is as
full as the forest and as
smooth as the sea.
But the
azure vessels
coursing by
this scarlet muscle
never fully penetrate
the swirling oblivion
of the mind.
And my soul
my very spirit is as
full as the forest and as
smooth as the sea.
As smooth as the
rushing, chopping
churning daybreak moonlight
sea!
I rage
whoosh
glimmer
roll and slow to
a trickle
trickle down
down
warming small
troubled rounded
pearl toes.
Title Quote: The Beatles, Carry That Weight
i like the repetition in this. i think that that's what's missing from a lot of blank verse; repetition and form. i think you do that nicely.
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